Feedback from the class
Negative feedback
-There needs to be footsteps at the beginning
-There needs to be music (extra-diegetic)
-In the shot where the boys cheer at Helen, it should either be cut shorter or left longer so that either the laughing is included or got rid of.
-There needs to be titles added at the beginning
-The transition after the guys cheering is not conventional.
Positive feedback
-There is a good use of different shots
-The final shot is conventional
-Good varied range of characters
-Good lighting
Feedback from family
Negative feedback
-It cut too abruptly from the shouting boys to Helen
-There is no atmospheric music
-Should have titles at the end
-Needs a narration at the end to fit with conventions
Positive feedback
-Obvious storyline with Helen being the centre of attention
-Good final shot with everyone standing behind Helen
-It left an impression making them want to see more
Feedback from friends
Positive feedback
-Good shots making it more interesting
-Good selection of different characters with obvious costumes
-The white fade transitions when she is walking is really effective and portrays her confident character well
Negative feedback
-There is no music to help move the trailer along
-Some of the transitions are too quick and rushed making the trailer look untidy
-There is no sound effects to enhance some of the actions
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