Sunday 16 January 2011

Magazine feedback 1st draft

Family feedback

Positive feedback

-Good relevant images

-Price is obvious

-Logo is good with the television screen

Negative feedbacks

-Looks blank

-Title isn't big enough

-Not eye-catching
Feedback from friends
Positive feedback
-Bright colours which are relevant to each storyline
-Nice layout with the other storylines down the side
-Obvious special edition at the top of the cover which makes it clear
Negative feedback
-The title is not clear and too small
-Nothing should overlap the logo
-There is not a date, barcode or issue number
Feedback from the class

Positive feedback

-The coloured sectioning around banner of storylines -its very conventional

-The bright pink tagline stands out and is relevant to the pregnancy storyline

-Good use of images with all different sizes

-The logo is interesting and quirky

-There is a price on it

Negative feedback

-The title is too small and not very clear

-There needs to be more overlapping

-The price needs a bold shape around it

-The '2 weeks revealed' shouldn't overlap the logo

-The overall colour and layout of the page is a bit blank

-The tagline is a bit too comical and could be seen as a sexual reference





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