Sunday 16 January 2011

Magazine final draft feedback

Family feedback

Positive feedback

-The tag line going in different directions adds interest

-Good use of exclamation marks

-Good bright colours

Negative feedback

-The images could have curved corners to make the layout look neater
-There could have been more information at the top of the cover
Feedback from friends
Positive feedback
-Good colouring behind the main image with a little bit of white still makes it neat but bold and stands out
-Having the images of the men around the girl on the main image makes the storyline have more possibilities and would interest the reader
-'2 weeks revealed' is in a good clear place under the logo and name of the magazine
Negative feedback
-One of the images overlaps another image a bit which looks messy
-There could have been a promotion or special gift offer to fill the space under the logo and name of magazine
Feedback from class
Positive feedback
-The colour red is very over powering so connotations are portrayed well
-The layout of pictures and coloured backgrounds is very neat and professional
-All the minor important details are present and clear on the cover
Negative feedback
-The white behind the main image makes the cover look a little messy and a bit blank
-The main shape of the images and tag lines is all square, not very varied and interesting.

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